Hearts in
Atlantis:
Stephen
King Gets Serious
About the Lost Boomer Generation
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by Charlie Onion |
Hearts
in Atlantis
Stephen King
Scribners
512 pp.
$20.00
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"Low Men
in Yellow Coats," the first story in Stephen King's new
collection of interconnected stories, is the best of the set,
hands-down. Now, I say 'story,' but that's really not entirely
correct. At two hundred and fifty-four pages, it's what most
minimalists would call a lengthy novel; in King's case, it might
be best to call it a novella. As one might expect, it's a horror-tinged
story, but King takes a leisurely pace, building the tension
slowly and turning it into the expected genre rather far into
the story.
The plot: It's the late spring of 1960, and a thirty-four-year-old
widow (Liz Garfield) and her eleven-year-old son (Bobby) live
a quietly tense life together in a small New England town. She's
got a vengeful streak and isn't above buying herself a silk dress
and refusing to give her son more than an adult library card
for his birthday. Still, in her own way, she cares for her son
and offers him a variety of sayings to prepare him for the real
world: "Best keep yourself to yourself," "I'd
trust him as far as I could sling a piano" and--her personal
favorite--"Life's not fair." Then a gray-haired, worn-down
man (Ted Brautigan) moves into their building. Bobby's mother
is instantly suspicious of him (she seems to think he's a pedophile,
though she doesn't say so up-front, at least initially), and
his friends suggest he's on the run from someone. But Bobby likes
him because the man gives him a copy of Lord of the Flies
and talks about literature in a serious tone. But as Bobby slowly
begins to notice, the new lodger isn't
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quite right. He has episodes where he "goes off"
to another place in his mind, and as Bobby learns, it's best
not to touch him when he's empty like that because touching him
somehow allows the man's frightening inner experiences to pass
into Bobby. (In Ted's words, "When I touch, I pass a kind
of window.") Then, in a move that seems to confirm his mental
problems, Ted hires Bobby to patrol the block, looking for "low
men in yellow coats." But strange things begin to happen--secret
signs appear, just as Ted said they would--and things start to
get distinctly weird.
The characters are vividly drawn here, and the story moves
along effortlessly once Bobby takes center-stage. King has a
particular knack for writing in young voices (an important skill,
given his fiction is so often about the struggle between innocence
and experience), and "Low Men in Yellow Coats" would
probably have been improved if King had limited the story to
Bobby's voice and left out the omniscient intrusions that make
the opening pages feel a bit stiff and awkward. (The way King
simply plops his backstories down into his narrative is particularly
disappointing. Surely, he could find a more novel--if not experimental--way
of doing this.)
That being said, I'll quickly say this: while it starts out
slowly (and probably goes on twenty pages too long; its ending
gives it a strung-out, artless shape), this is ultimately one
of the most harrowing yet touching stories you could imagine
reading. The relationship between Bobby and Ted is wonderfully
developed, and its denouement is heart-crushing.
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Unfortunately,
most of the other four stories in this collection aren't nearly
as good.
"Hearts in Atlantis," the most substantial story
among the four at least in length, is a rather flaccid narrative
set in 1966. In a nutshell: Peter Riley, the story's narrator,
enters the University of Maine as a Goldwater Republican, finds
his grades slipping when he becomes obsessed with the card game
Hearts, and only belatedly makes the swing to the Left with the
rest of his generation. The catalyst is Vietnam, of course (as
it is in all the stories here, except for "Low Men in Yellow
Coats") , but Riley's narrative is too loose and the storyline
too pedestrian and unfocused to hold our interest. Worse, most
of King's characters here are little more than cardboard figures,
and he simply can't generate an engaging, intelligent conflict
with such material. The one notable exception is Carol Gerber,
Bobby's young girlfriend in "Low Men in Yellow Coats."
She appears here as Peter's new girlfriend and has the distinction
of being the one character whose thoughts and actions aren't
easily predicted by the reader.
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"Blind Willie" is decidedly more intriguing (and
shorter). The year is 1983, and a yuppie wakes up in the Connecticut
suburbs, rides the train to work in the city, takes the elevator
up to his office...and quietly climbs through the ceiling to
the office he rents directly above his official office. He then
takes off his suit, puts on his dogtags and writes "I'm
heartily sorry" over and over again--as he's done every
day for a long time. He then changes into a new set of clothes,
slicks back his hair and hits the street as a repairman--only
to change into a new disguise in a hotel bathroom. This time,
he hits the streets as a blind Vietnam vet panhandler named Blind
Willie, "a Fifth Avenue fixture since the days of Gerald
Ford." Intriguing, eh? The fact that the yuppie is indeed
a Vietnam vet (although not the one he claims to be, exactly)
and is one of the boys who attacked Carol Gerber with a baseball
bat when she was eleven puts a chilling spin on the story's subtext.
"Why We're In Vietnam," is ostensibly similar to
"Blind Willie," though it's set in 1999. This time,
the Vietnam vet is John Sullivan, Carol Gerber's high school
boyfriend. Sullivan is, in a word, haunted--but not in
the traditional King sense. Instead, he's spent thirty years
hallucinating that an old, white-haired Vietnamese mamasan
is sitting in the room with him, staring at him quietly. The
story's more of a character study than anything else; it certainly
couldn't stand on its own. As with "Hearts in Atlantis"--and
unlike "Low Men in Yellow Coats" and "Blind Willie"--one
can't help feeling that the story suffers because King skims
over his character's plight from a distance, rather than dramatizing
it with focused intensity. All the drama is in the backstory,
and it fails to justify the story's bizarre ending.
"Heavenly Shades of Night Are Falling," the last
story in the collection (and by far the shortest), brings Bobby
into the present (1999) for a brief, seemingly unnoticed homecoming.
But Bobby's voice here seems little different from Sullivan's
or Pete's, and it should best be considered a brief closing coda
for the collection. Like "Why We're In Vietnam," its
dramatic momentum is undercut by the main character's morbid
reflections, and the actual events seem a little forced and self-conscious.
Repeatedly in
Hearts in Atlantis, King's characters--and, by extension,
King implies, all baby boomers--face a critical question: when
you pass from childhood's innocence into that heart-shattering
world of adult experience, do you stand up against the worst
things experience tries to force on you? Do you defiantly bring
something of the innocent's splendor with you or do you quietly
give in? Do you, at least, have the courage to try to
defy it? As the characters in Hearts in Atlantis learn,
to acquiesce to experience's awful sweep--to give in quietly
with the hope that it will go easy on you--is a sin, whether
it's keeping quiet while friends beat a girl or refusing to participate
in an anti-war rally for fear your parents might find out. (As
the Vietnam vet says in "Blind Willie," "You
do penance as much for what you were spared as for what you actually
did.)
Too many boomers, King seems to suggest, simply gave up after
innocence lost out (and Atlantis sank, in his metaphor) and turned
in the 1980s to mean, self-centered greed (in King's phrase,
"retired [hippies] who progressed from selling cocaine to
selling junk bonds over the phone)--only to settle now for the
diminished expectations of the twilight years. As one of the
Vietnam vets says to Sullivan in "Why We're In Vietnam,"
"I like lots of people our age when they're one by one...but
I loathe and despise my generation, Sully. We had an opportunity
to change everything. We actually did. Instead we settled for
designer jeans, two tickets to Mariah Carey at Radio City Music
Hall, frequent flier miles, James Cameron's Titanic, and
retirement portfolios. The only generation even close to us in
pure, selfish self-indulgence is the so-called Lost Generation
of the twenties, and at least most of them had the decency to
stay drunk. We couldn't even do that. Man, we suck."
It's a fine, provocative subject to explore, though people
on either side of the boomers' era might find it a bit self-centered.
But, while at least two of the stories here are strong, King
simply doesn't make Hearts in Atlantis's story arc from
1960 to 1999 compelling as fiction, from beginning to end. The
stories, in short, don't talk to each other--and probably
can't because they have such disparate voices and divergent genres.
Attentive readers will pick up on abiding themes and images
that tie the stories together, but too often they lack that elusive
quality that makes their connection seem magical. For
this sort of exercise to work, the reader must feel an otherworldly
quality makes them recur; but King fails to show us the eerie
necessity that brings his themes up again and again.
In the end, Hearts in Atlantis offers one great novella
and a strong short story with three other stories offered up
for the idly curious--or for graduate students interested in
building theses out of King's musings on baby boomers' flaws.
Of course, two out of five seems like a bad success rate. But
those two stories are good enough to recommend the collection
overall.
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